moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 Ok, I would feel bad about just trying to plug my own work so I'm gonna make a thread about it :D I've written a little poetry over the last few months, and have thrown it up on a little (unfinished) site for all to see... http://dickerbeen.atspace.com/index.htm Now, as I said, I'd feel bad dedicating a thread just to me, so why don't y'all post poems or links to poems you have written? Look forward to seeing what you guys have written! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 *bump* no-one feeling creative...? :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melodic Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 There was a young hooker from Looe Who filled her vagina with glue. She said with a grin, 'If they pay to get in, 'They can pay to get out of here, too!' :roll: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 That's... yeah, that's... that'll do ;) Thanks melodic ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 The wind blows up my nose Horza, aged 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melodic Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 :D i like to impress the readers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 /me is beginning to regret bumping... ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 Here's a good one: Samwiches for tea Samwiches for tea We all having Samwiches for tea Also by me aged 5. That is apparently how I thought sandwich was spelt when I was 5. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melodic Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 you wnna bumb darren ;) haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 that works for me, I like food :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 I do? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 I think he was referring to me... :roll: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 Oh right. What does bumb mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonlit Posted May 7, 2006 Author Share Posted May 7, 2006 I think he meant 'bum' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melodic Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 i ment bump but bum is good as long as its wess flavour Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 No idea what this is supposed to be.. I think it's a poem. Anyway, I wrote this when I was 9 years old and I think I was just trying to sound dramatic because it doesn't really reflect my life as a 9 year old at all. Also I have no idea what I was counting... whatever it was there were 49 of them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 This isn't really poetry, but it's pretty good. Sorry to go off topic, but bla. Future calligrapher? Better spelling than Sparda's? Doctrine to challenge Scientology's? You decide... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melodic Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 indoctrination Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLSS Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 ok i'm actually verry poeitic but not in the positive sence ..... this is from 3 years ago or so .... bout a girl from school ... it mixes future with past and speaks as current bout future , guess it dont make lotta sence but hey .... (explicit lyrics jadajadajada .....) title : damn dirty bitch I hate you you damn dity bitch they shud cut your body up and put it in a fridge. you're a ice queen i know where you're going , i know were u've been you never learned anything all u ever needed to do was suck the teacher's dick and even he knew you were just a prick. even when u're frozen up u'll be f*cked by him and his kin. you think and look like your thin but your neck is just a thick as the teacher's dick would've been you've always been the cool kid now u're just old ,stretched out and stupid you're old ,ugly , bad the teacher was glad about the thousand blowjobs he had now there's no more beauty, just fat u'll have no more money, just a dirty old shirt in plaid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLSS Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 o and here's the english translation of a poem i once wrote for a gf of mine .... ( dont ryme cos of translating , dont make much sence anymore either ...) title : concentration u're in my head i try to concentrate i constantly think of u but i have to study its like hunger for apple's in a garden of pears how i look forward to ... see,feel,kiss your skin. you look o so beautifull. to hear u speak such a wonderfull sound. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLSS Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 nother translated one . ( written while i was wating for my old love to arrive) title : i feel i feel beter i feel great she's like a prinses that lifts the curse my life was hell now she's my heaven she's so beutifull i was like a bird in a cage she's so sweet , my cruel sweet love when r u here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 indoctrination What is? Is that a poem? If it is it's a bit short. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melodic Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 its a word from a dimmu borgir song title :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaun Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 I know what indoctrination is, what do you think is indoctrination? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cooper Posted May 7, 2006 Share Posted May 7, 2006 I thought we grew tired of the whole Emo thing by now, but I guess I was wrong. :D I never wrote poetry, but there's a rather delightful bit of song text I'd like to share with you all: The Meaning Of Life by Leng Tch'E from the album Manmadepredator: One night my mom was drinking in a bar She told me to sit down and listen to her story She's telling me my conception came when they were both tipsy. That's why I was put on this earth? Because you motherfuckers were both drunk? But what she's really trying to say is that I'm just not wanted here. No one welcomed me to this earth. Nobody wants to have me here. I feel like I'm all alone. What the fuck did I do wrong?!? Long time ago I had a depression. My father's trying reverse psychology. He's telling me I cost too much. So I propose to him to jump off a cliff And what he answers then is "No you don't have to go that far" But what he's really trying to say is "Just don't blame me in your suicide note" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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